Outline #2 (revised)

I. Hook/Intro/ Topic- I am a loyalists living in South Carolina during the American Revolution.
II. Background Info- During the American Revolution, the colonies were divided between loyalists, patriots and the ones that were undecided. Sometimes, the factor of where a certain individual lived would play a big part in whether they would want to take the loyalists side or the patriot’s side.
III. Thesis- The flourishing economy of the eastern side of South Carolina has caused loyalists like myself of the backcountry to resent and go against the selfish ideas of those patriots whom have all the political power.
IV. Body
----A. All the political power will lie in the hands of the patriots if we were to become an independent country.
-------1. “Supporting Quote”
---------a. Analysis of the quote
---------b. What does it mean to the backcountry South Carolinians if the wealthy coast planters had all the power?
-------2. “Supporting Quote”
---------a. Analysis of the quote
----B. The British Government can put restrictions on the democratic views and ideas of the patriots.
-------1. “Supporting Quote”
---------a. Analysis

V. Brief Summary/ New Insight